I wish I had a pair of wings，Take me all over the world to see the beautiful spring，Because spring is holy ，I love Spring 。  The sun is shining on my body，I looked at the fragrant flowers and green grass. Spring girl’s footsteps have come to the earth ，Small trees have leaves, I touch the skin of a tree。I listen to the footsteps of the spring rain ，I planted the seeds of hope.，Spring has come。      I took the hand of spring girl, I hope my Chunkun winter just disappear, I hope my achievements, such as spring like, getting better and better, I hope my knowledge, such as the new grass, which grows higher, more and more rich.

I really hope that the spring will never stop, and I embrace life。 Now I don’t say it. I want to feel the spring.

修改后：

I wish I had a pair of wings which can take me to see the beautiful spring around the world. Because spring is holy, I love spring.

In spring, the sun shines brightly, and the weather becomes warmer and warmer. The flowers begin to bloom, and the trees begin to turn green. So I can go outside to enjoy the sunshine and smell the flowers. Sometimes, it rains. We feel very comfortable.

In spring, farmers start to sow the seeds. And I am also ready to have a new start. I am ready to work hard. I am ready to learn. I hope my knowledge, like the new grass, will be richer and richer. 

修改老师：Crystal老师

    六年级:管晓宇