Hug hug spring spring spring, a common name, but the world is to love her... The hot spring, no, no the bitter winter.

Spring, always give a person a kind of warmth, a gentleness. Make the person can’t help fall in love with her. Woke up in the spring of a group of grass. You see, the green grass, like a group of lively and lovely children, naughty ground to get from the mother’s arms stretch out to the little head. They are not afraid of warm weather, to meet the warm spring. Joy of dancing; Spring, the gently singing, came to the brook drew many small insects, those naughty children also involuntarily look lively. They, and spring, played songs of life together... Spring, it is the smile of the earth, the spring, is the smell of grass, is to let the children happy paradise; Spring, is the goddess of nature. The colorful paints on the earth, rub the sky is clear blue. Let the 7 colour of light return to their homes.

Spring is colorful. The wind of spring is green, green blowing across the fields, wheat seedlings turn green; Green blow across the stream, clear water, green; Blows over the hills, green trees bud spit. Actually, ah, spring is a great painter, she drew a clear brook, green mountains, moist soil. The scent of the soil, but also a magic! Hey, the spring is also a great musician. She will rest in the large forest, changed the lark, cuckoo, as well as other singer’s large ensemble. Someone said, spring is a magician, became a miracle in the world.

The gardener said, spring is fairy flowers, trees and flowers has turned out very beautiful flowers; The teacher said, spring is a farmer, sow the seeds of love; The children said, spring is one of nature’s editors, gave us a amusement park. I said, spring is guiding angel, lead us toward the correct path; Mom and dad said, spring is a guardian angel, accompany us healthy growth... Ah! Spring ah, bring you a piece of vibrant, you make all the life all things recovery, the awaken of spring is abundant. Ah! Spring ah, thank you for your gift! Would you please get the kids to embrace you! Together, let us embrace spring too

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     Spring is like a warm and gentle person. People always can’t help falling in love with her. In spring, we can see the green grass, like a group of lively and lovely children who run and play around. They are not afraid of warm weather, and they want to welcome the warm spring. They sing, dance, and play together. Spring is the smile of the earth, the smell of the grass, the happy paradise of the children and the goddess of the nature.

Spring is colorful. The wind of spring is green. Green blow across the fields, wheat seedlings turn green. Green blow across the stream, clear water turns green. Green blow over the hills, green trees bud spit. Actually, spring is a great painter. She draws a clear brook, green mountains and moist soil. Spring is a great musician. She rests in the large forest, changes the lark, cuckoo, as well as other singer’s ensemble. Spring is a magician. She makes a miracle in the world.

The gardener says spring is fairy flowers which turns trees and flowers more beautiful. The teacher says spring is a farmer who sows the seeds of love. The children say, spring is one of the nature’s editors who gives us an amusement park. Mom and dad say spring is a guardian angel who accompanies us healthy growth. I say spring is guiding angel who leads us toward the right path. Spring brings us vibrant and makes all the lives come back to life. I want to thank spring for her gift! Let us embrace spring!

修改老师：Crystal老师 

    六年级:孙圣博