We 　have 　an　 English 　teacher. She 　is 　Miss　 Zhou. She 　is 　very 　friendly, because 　she　 has　 a 　pair 　of 　big 　and 　black　 eyes. Her　 ears 　are 　small. Her 　favourite 　season　 is 　summer. Why? Because　 in 　the 　summer, she 　can　 take　 the 　students　 of　 our 　class　 have 　a 　picnic,    but 　also　 took 　our　 class　 to　 participate　 in 　various 　activities　 and　 fun.Of course, we　 like 　her very 　much, and 　we　 respect 　her. Because　 she　 often 　in 　our 　study　 of 　the　 confusion, to　 help　 us, teach 　us 　how　 to　 do　 this 　kind 　of　 problem.In 　our　 view, 　our　 English　 teacher 　is 　very 　good 　and 　competent.

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We have an English teacher. She is Miss Zhou. She has a pair of big black eyes and her ears are small. Her favourite season is summer. Why? Because in summer, she 　can take the students out to have a picnic, and also can take our class to participate　 in various activities. We like her very much, and we respect her. Because she often helps us when we are in trouble, teaching us how to deal with different kinds of　 problems. In our view, our English teacher is very good and competent.

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