There were actually, valuable animals in the world; they are not only pandas or other animals sorts; but lizards too.

  A lizard can be a very good animal; it can camouflage, and not to be seen, some like in Africa can even switch color; some are even in China. Besides camouflaging and color changing, some even have super strength, some stories in the future, have many stories; like this one:

  A boy once found an egg, and didn’t know what was in it, and so left it in his room to keep it safe. For a short time he thought that it was a chicken, at another hand it was a duck… Just as he was about to speak up, he found out that he was wrong, for the egg hatched, and out came a little green guy; and that was the first lizard in the world.

  The boy found out about this of course, and was not pleased at all. He thought that it was just what was on the TV show, a toy egg, except it can move. It was an alive toy, but the boy didn’t notice that it was actually an animal: When he was just about to send him away to sell and earn money, he found only his regular toys on the ground, but not the lizard; that was when the lizard used his camouflage.

  And so you see, a lizard: Like the one in the story, can use its camouflage to save his life. Now let us continue this story:

  The boy was astonished, then he turned back, and then turned to where the lizard stood, then he found him; he thought this was a sort of magic trick, at last he went to watch TV; because he thought that he could find out something about that lizard. But he found his feet stuck under a big shelf. Suddenly he found the lizard come here, and lift up the toy easily; that was when he used his super strength…

  There are still many stories of lizards, but now you have noticed the basics of lizards. Not let us finish the story:

  The boy thought that this lizard was amazing, he tickled him, and then he lay down and squealed. The boy knew at once that this was no ordinary toy, this was a real life animal. He was more than astonished, for he didn’t actually know that this was an amazing animal. When he finished school the next day, he went home. He found a coloring pencil and to color a picture for fun; but he didn’t realize that this was a lizard, the lizard switched back immediately to save his own life.

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 There were actually, valuable animals in the world; they are not only pandas or other animals sorts; but lizards as well.

  A lizard can be a very amazing animal. It can camouflage, and not to be seen. Some kinds in Africa or China can even switch colors. Besides camouflaging and color changing, some even have super strength; some always appears in the stories; like this one:

  A boy once found an egg, and didn’t know what was in it, so he left it in his room to keep it safe. he thought that it might be a chicken or a duck… Just as he was about to speak up, he found out that he was wrong, for the egg hatched, and out came a little green guy; and that was the first lizard in the world.

  The boy found out about this of course, and was not pleased at all. He thought that it was just what was on the TV show, a toy egg, except for its move. It was an alive toy, but the boy didn’t notice that it was actually an animal. When he was just about to send him away to sell and earn money, he only found his regular toys on the ground, but not the lizard. The lizard used its camouflage.

  As you see, a lizard, like the one in the story, can use the camouflage to save its life. Now let us continue this story:

  The boy was astonished. He turned back, and then turned to where the lizard stood, Luckily he found it. He thought this was a sort of magic trick. At last he went to watch TV because he thought that he could find out something about that lizard. But he found his feet stuck under a big shelf. Suddenly he found the lizard come here, and lift up the toy easily. The lizard used its super strength.

  There are still many stories of lizards, but now you have noticed the basics of lizards. Not let us finish the story:

  The boy thought that this lizard was amazing, he tickled him, and then he lay down and squealed. The boy knew at once that this was no ordinary toy, this was a real life animal. He was more than astonished, for he didn’t actually know that this was an amazing animal. When he finished school the next day, he went home. He found a colored pencil and to color a picture for fun; but he didn’t realize that this was a lizard, the lizard switched back immediately to save its own life.

    四年级:欧阳雨鹭