In the grave yard of Africa, there was an old gentleman that seemed just like a normal garden, but yet it didn’t seem like it at all.

  When the time had passed in order to make the world’s life come true, some of the famous writers like Todd Marin were provided in the group’s mayor of Pairs. It was an odd word, but also inside the effects of programming on a website; I have a funny story.

  One day I was going out on the road, I found out that I had left my wallet, and so I had to go back and fetch it; after that I started away again. But I found out that going on foot my feet was like very sour, then I had to go back and ride on my bike. When I road it almost half way to school, I figured out that my project was at home, I had to go back again; that made me exhausted, but I prefer that way since my teacher is going crazy the past few days. I went home and got my project, then I hopped on again; I knew that all of my stuff was packed up, but my bike tires were out of air; at that time, I was full of anger and stamped my feet.

  I had to walk home and park it, after that I walked to school. When I was walking and walking, I was wondering what time it was; since I had my watch on my wrist, I know what time it is. But, when I just lifted my wrist to my face to see what time it was, Ah! Time gave me the answer that: There was only two more minutes until school starts!

  I rushed to school as fast as my legs could carry me. When I arrived, the teacher asked me, “Why are you so late?” I didn’t answer, the teacher gave me extra homework, but it was just like usual. In the noon my dad didn’t question me about it, and so I was safe.

  It was a very funny story, and it was like that I had a very unlucky habit; it was actually nothing to worry about since I got my grades up my schoolwork was always finished in time, and so I had nothing to worry about anymore. It was a very glad day.

  But I just wish that life is better than this.

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 In the grave yard of Africa, there was an old gentleman. The garden seemed just like a normal one, but yet it didn’t in fact.

  When the time had passed, in order to make the world’s life come true, some of the famous writers like Todd Marin were invited in the group’s mayor of Pairs. It was an odd word, but also inside the effects of programming on a website; I have a funny story.

  One day I was going out on the road, I found out that I had left my wallet so I had to go back and fetch it; after that I started away again. But I found out that going on foot my feet were very sour, and then I had to go back and ride on my bike. When I rode it almost half way to school, I figured out that my project was at home, I had to go back again; that made me exhausted, but I prefer that way since my teacher is going crazy the past few days. I went home and got my project, then I hopped on again; I knew that all of my stuff was packed up, but my bike tires were out of air; at that time, I was full of anger and stamped my feet.

  I had to walk home and park it, after that I walked to school. When I was walking and walking, I was wondering what time it was; since I had my watch on my wrist, I know what time it is. But, when I just lifted my wrist to my face to see what time it was, Ah! Time gave me the answer that: There was only two more minutes until school starts!

  I rushed to school as fast as my legs could carry me. When I arrived, the teacher asked me, “Why are you so late?” I didn’t answer, the teacher gave me extra homework, but it was just like usual. At noon my dad didn’t question me about it and I was safe.

  It was a very funny story, and it was like that I had a very unlucky habit; it was actually nothing to worry about since I got my grades up my schoolwork was always finished on time, and so I had nothing to worry about anymore. It was a very glad day.

  But I just wish that life is better than this.

    四年级:欧阳雨鹭