英文作文 2021-02-03 07:21:59
2017年高考全国1卷英语作文范文及赏析三
Dear Leslie,
How's it going? Have you absorbed all the knowledge I taught you last time? Now let me tell you the information of next lesson.
I will give the lesson on next Saturday morning, from 8:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. at 101 Room in the teaching building in our school.
We are going to learn about Tang poetry, which is an extremely important part of not only Chinese language but also Chinese culture. What you need to do in advance is to know briefly about the history of Tang Dynasty. You can consult the Internet or the books I gave you. Besides, don't forget to review what you have learned before.
I am looking forward to our meeting. See you next week!
Yours,
Li Hua.
点评:本文要点覆盖全面,行文流畅,有额外的细节添加,结构清晰紧凑,语法错误较少,运用了一定的复杂句式,如定语从句which is an extremely important part…,主语从句What you need to do in advance is…等等;同时有一定的词汇亮点如absorb,extremely替换了very等。
建议:句式方面,可以适当再增加一些高级句式。
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