Walking  in  the  street, singing, breathing  and  smiling. Yes, it’s  March, spring  is  coming.   Miss  Spring  is  very  shy, she  has  the  quietest  foot-steps  in  the  world. Therefore, everything      is  growing  in  silence  during  spring, as  a  consquence, we  aren’t  aware  that  spring  has  come      until  certain  signs  appear.   A  year’s  plan  starts  in  spring. Spring  is  temporary  but  full  of  vigor  and  vitality. So, I  think something  meaningful  should  be  done  for  the  special  season.  Hug  in  spring, hug  in  health. As  we  know, a  healthy  body  is  worth  more  than  gold. Affecte by  the  fog, people  hardly  go  out  in  winter, in  fact, it’s  bad  for  our  body. Now, in  the  early   spring, just  go  out  with  family, sitting  on  the  grass, seeing  the  scattered  flowers  spread     from  near  to  far, listening  to  the  birds  singing  in  the  tree  and  breathing  the  fresh  air    around you, at  the  same  time, having  a  picnic, I’m  sure  everyone  of  your  family  will  be  in  a  good     mood! Of  course, you  can  also  have  an  outing  in  spring  with  your  friends.   Hug  in  spring, hug  in  success. Now  it  is  the  beginning  of  the  new  year, a  specific      plan  should  be  made  carefully  and  completed  in  time. Working  under  the   direction  of     the arrangements, we  will  keep  energetic  all  year  round, and  we  will  achieve  our  goals  and      make  much  progress  in  the  end!  Hug  in  spring, hug  in  dream. As  students  of  Senior  3, it  won’t  be  long  before  we     graduate  and  take  the  National  Matriculation  Examinations. It’s  certain  that  all  of  us  are eager  to  enter  excellent  colleges, so  we  are  supposed  to  make  every  effort  to  study  hard     and  improve  our  grades  rapidly. Just  sow  in  spring,  and  the  efforts  will  become  the  reality    in  autumn, we  will  reap  what  we  sowed! Remember, little  steps  add  up  to  a  big  dream!      Hug  in  spring, hug  in  what  you  want! The  spring  is  exact, the  sunshine  is  warm!

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Walking  in  the  street, I can hear birds singing and see flowers smiling. Spring  has  come quietly. Everything begins to come back to life and starts to grow. A  year’s  plan  starts  in  spring. Spring is short but  full  of  vigor  and  vitality. So, I  think something  meaningful  should  be  done. Hug in  spring and be health. As  we  know, a  healthy  body  is  worth  more  than  gold. Because of the haze, people  hardly  go  out  in  winter, which is  bad  for  our  body. Now, it’s time for going out  with  family, to sit  on  the  grass, see colorful  flowers, listen  to  birds  singing and  breathe fresh  air. At  the  same  time, we can have a picnic with our family and have a great time. Of  course, you can also have an outing with your friends. Hug  in  spring and be successful. Now  it  is  the  beginning  of  the  new  year, a  specific plan  should  be  made  carefully  and  completed  in  time. Working  under  the   direction  of     the      arrangements, we  will  keep  energetic  all  year  round, and  we  will  achieve  our  goals  and make  much  progress  in  the  end! Hug  in  spring and be practical. As  high school seniors, we will soon take the National College Entrance Examination and graduate from high school. It’s  certain  that  all  of  us  are eager  to  enter  excellent  colleges, so  we  are  supposed  to  make  every  effort  to  study  hard and  improve  ourselves rapidly. We sow  in  spring,  keeping  on working hard. Then we  can  reap  what  we  sowed! Remember, little  steps  add  up  to  a  big  dream! Hug  in  spring, and hug  in  what  you  want! 

修改老师：Crystal 老师 

    高三:李和淼