In the past few years, along with people living standard enhancement, most people gradually change from material consumption to spiritual consumption. As we can see , some Chinese tourism industry is rapidly developing, but at the same time some impolite phenomenon also occurs.

     For instance, some tourists throw rubbish here and there , causing lots of sanitation workers to take up this complex work and sometimes they hardly have a rest. What’s worse, some people are so crazy that they seat or stand on the buildings to take photos. On the one hand, it’s very dangerous for them to climb some buildings, on the other hand, the building is a symbol of local culture, this kind of behavior has formed a destruction of cultural relics.

      According to some of the above uncivilized actions, I suggest we should have a good manner. Wherever we go , we can understand and experience some beauty and subtlety of native culture. Local government also need to establish perfect  laws to regulate people behavior.

      Take actions! 

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     In the past few years, along with the development of people’s living standard, most people gradually change from material consumption to spiritual consumption. As we can see, some Chinese tourism industry is developing rapidly, but at the same time some impolite phenomena also occur.

     For instance, some tourists throw rubbish here and there , causing lots of complex work for sanitation workers. Sometimes they hardly have a rest. What’s worse, some people are so crazy that they sit or stand on the buildings to take photos. On the one hand, it’s very dangerous for them to climb some buildings. On the other hand, the building is a symbol of local culture, this kind of behavior has formed a destruction of cultural relics.

      According to some of the uncivilized actions above, I suggest we should have a good manner. Wherever we go , we can understand and experience some beauty and subtlety of native culture. Local government also needs to establish perfect laws to regulate people’s behavior.

      Don’t wait, let’s take actions now! 

    高三:寒子兮