Dear Suan,     I’m glad that you are coming to visit Hang Zhou in the summer vacation.Hang Zhou is in the southeastern of China. It’s warm and the air is fresh.Hang Zhou is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest,such as the West Lake and the Lingyin temple.The west lake is well known for its beautiful lake,of which the water is clear and looks colorful. There are many delicious food in Hang Zhou. You can taste Dongpo Meat and West Lake Beef Soup. I think you will like it. Hang Zhou is also an economical developing city.It’s famous for tea and silk in the world. Hang Zhou people are very friendly and hard-working. I think you would love this unusual city. I hope you’ll have a good time in Hang Zhou.          Yours,    Li Hua.

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Dear Suan,     

  I’m glad that you are coming to visit Hang Zhou in the summer vacation.Hang Zhou is in the southeast of China. It’s warm and the air is fresh.

  Hang Zhou is rich in tourist attractions, and there are many world-famous places of interest,such as the West Lake and the Lingyin temple. The west lake is well known for its beautiful lake,of which the water is clear and looks colorful. There are many kinds of delicious food in Hang Zhou. You can taste Dongpo Meat and West Lake Beef Soup. I think you will like them.

  Hang Zhou is also an economical developing city. It’s famous for tea and silk in the world. The people in Hangzhou are very friendly and hard-working. I think you would love this unusual city.

  I hope you’ll have a good time in Hang Zhou.                                                                    Yours,    Li Hua.

    高三:蔡梓微