When you look around, you will find that the spring is coming . In spring, the weather getting warmer, the days getting longer and everthing starts to grow.

I like this season, because it’s a good time for sightseeing. The sunshine is soft and warmth. Swallows fly back. The trees turn green and flowers come out. They are very beautiful, isn’t it? Beautiful scenery to disperse us whiny.

     Spring is not a bad season. Some farmers are busy scattering seed. The rivers formed by the melting of ice and snow provide water for irrigation.  The field is full of energy and hope.

     All persons should seek to become acquainted with the beauty in spring. This beauty is so comformable to our tender and noblest feelings, that it is painful to think of some people living in the midst of it and yet remaining almost blind to it.

    Dear, keep walking in spring. Let the special of the moment help you discover new ways of tasting life’s niceness.

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When you look around, you will find that the spring is coming. In spring, the weather is getting warmer and warmer, and the days are getting longer. Everthing starts to grow.

I like spring, because it’s a good time for sightseeing. The sun shines brightly and warmly. Swallows fly back. The trees turn green and flowers come out. They are very beautiful, aren’t they? 

Spring is a good season. Farmers are busy sowing seeds. The field is full of energy and hope.

All people should go outside and enjoy the beautiful spring which can make people feel comfortable and relax.
Let’s go walking in spring, breathe the fresh air in spring and enjoy ourselves in spring.

修改老师：Crystal老师 

    高二:蔡梓微