Everyone kows that there are for seasons in a year.They are spring,summer,fall and winter.Now let me  yotellu about them.      Spring is a warm season.In the season,everything comes back to life.The leaves start to turn  green.It is a good time to fly kite with friends.  In summer,the temperature is very high so that the weather is very hot.Many people like to go to swim in this season.And it often rains,so you should remember to take an umbrella.  In fall,the weather becomes cooler,and the days grow shorter.It’s a good season for climbing   moutains.Because the leaves start to turn yellow.  Winter is very cold.And it often snows.So people can make snowmen.Some people like to go to    swim in this season.Everybody should wear warm clothes because it often makes people fall ill.    Which season do you like best ? Can you tell me ?

修改后：
Everyone knows that there are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. Now let me tell you something about them.   Spring is a warm season. In spring, everything comes back to life. The leaves start to turn green. It is a good time to fly kites with friends. In summer, the temperature is very high so that the weather is very hot. Many people like going swimming in summer. And it often rains, so you’d better take an umbrella with you. In fall, the weather becomes cooler, and the days grow shorter. It’s a good season for climbing   moutains. Because the leaves start to turn yellow. It is very cold in winter. And it often snows. So people can make snowmen. Everybody should wear warm clothes because it is easy to get a cold. Which season do you like best? Can you share with me? 

修改老师：Crystal老师 

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