There is a person she silently pay no return，than person is the mother。the life of me、raising me、bring me up 、give me a home ，Let me be free from care。 But l always do not understand ，think this  is  as unalterable principles， but l was wrong。I want to say to her：l love you，Can say not to export。 When l need help，I  always think of her first，and she will do her best to help me。When l am happy ，she will be more happy than me ，when l am sad，she will accompany me。  I sincerely say to you ，thank you 。

修改后：
My mother is a person who silently pays no return to take care of me. She gave me life and a home. She tries her best to raise me up and always put me at the first place. But sometimes I can't understand her. I think I can do lots of things by myself. Even I said something not good to her. I deeply regret. I want to tell her that I love her. When I need help, she will be there and do her best to help me. When I am happy, she will be happier than me. When I am sad, she will accompany me. I want to say, "Mum, thank you and I love you!"

批改老师：Crystal老师

 

    初二:左兴汶