Spring is a season full of hope, and it makes people feel happy and excited . The little swallow in order to enjoy the beautiful spring , even if their feathers all wet . lt is still in the sky fly. ln fact , we should also like a swallow , with lofty ideals , and for the sake of the ideal , to fly . This is the spring rain , the united states it ? ln fact , l think the beauty of the spring breeze it is not worse than the spring rain . The spring breeze , it waving willow pine waist , blowing hair , the view is fantastic .
 It is in my eyes , is a beautiful season , whether it is the cool spring breeze or the gentle spring breeze , it makes me feel the vitality of life . Where is spring ? Don’t try to find , as long as your heart has been full of hope , as long as you do not give up your dream , as long as you will work hard , then the spring will live in your heart , never far away . l like spring !

修改后：
Spring is a season of hope, and it makes people feel happy and excited.  The little swallows back from the faraway south are flying in the sky to enjoy the beautiful spring. The spring breeze is blowing gently.  The willow is dancing with the breeze.  The flowers are smiling in the breeze. How fantastic the view is!
Where is spring ? Don’t try to find, it is everywhere. As long as your heart is full of hope, as long as you never give up your dream, as long as you continue working hard , the spring will be in your heart. l like spring ! 

修改老师：Crystal老师 

    初二:宋嘉敏