Spring from this beautiful garden, like the spirit of love is everywhere; every kind of flowers and plants are on the earth’s dark chest, from the sleep of the dream to wake up. -- Shelley   Spring is so great that many people all like it very much.Zhuxi is a person like spring.  He said：‘’I find the face of vernal wind in easy way ：Myiadds of red sand violets reveal only spring.‘’In spring,rape field is filled with gold.You can see plenty of butterflies and bees flying in the sky.It’s very beautiful.we can also do other things make us happy.For example,we can go hiking,plant trees……I think admire the beauty of flowers is the best choice.I wish you happiness in spring.   Spring is the best time to prepaer.There is a chinese saying：Make your whole year’s plan in the spring and the whole day’s plan in the morning.So we should work hard for our better future.   Let’us hug in spring!Enjoy today,expect for future1

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Spring from this beautiful garden, like the spirit of love is everywhere; every kind of flowers and plants are on the earth’s dark chest, from the sleep of the dream to wake up. -- Shelley   
  Spring is so great that many people all like it very much. Zhuxi is a person who likes spring.  He said, "Everyone could feel the gentle wind, and enjoy the colorful spring." In spring, we can see butterflies and bees flying around the blooming flowers. It’s very beautiful. And we can also do lots of things to make us happy. For example, we can go hiking, plant trees, and so on.  Spring is the best time to get ready for a new beginning. There is a Chinese saying, "Make your whole year’s plan in the spring and the whole day’s plan in the morning." So we should work hard for our better future.   Let’us hug in spring! 

修改老师：Crystal 老师 

    初二:张莉