Different people have different hobbies. I have many hobbies, such as reading, writing and playing football. But my favorite hobby is reading！I have kept reading for five years.

  I started reading when I was ten years old, my teacher often encouraged us to read different kinds of books. Because when I was reading, I felt I was in a different and amazing world, just like travelling around the world with the writers.

  It has become a part of my life. I often read books in my free time, because the books are so interesting that they always make me feel relaxed after hard work.

  Reading not only opens my eyes, but also improves my writing. I have learned a lot from books. When I am reading, it is just like talking with famous persons, I like Mo Yan’s works. Mo Yan is the first Chinese Nobel Prize winner. I’m encouraged by him very much, although he was poor when he was young, it didn’t stop him reading books. Because of it, he has become a successful writer in the world

  Reading is so useful that I love it!

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  Different people have different hobbies. I have many hobbies, such as reading, writing and playing football. But my favorite hobby is reading！I have kept reading for five years.

  I started reading when I was ten years old, my teacher often encouraged us to read different kinds of books. Because when I was reading, I felt I was in a different and amazing world, just like travelling around the world with the writers.

  It has become a part of my life. I often read books in my free time, because the books are so interesting that they always make me feel relaxed after hard work.

  Reading not only opens up my eyes, but also improves my writing. I have learned a lot from books. When I read a book, it is just like talking with famous persons. I like Mo Yan’s works. Mo Yan is the first Chinese Nobel Prize winner. I’m encouraged by him very much. Although he was poor when he was young, it didn’t stop him from reading books. Because of it, he has become a successful writer in the world.

  Reading is so useful that I love it!

    初二:蒋婉迪