Everyone has different hobbies. Hobbies can make you grow as a person, develop your interest and make you learn new skills. I have many hobbies, such as playing basketball, playing football and riding a bike. But my favorite hobby is riding a bike, I began to ride a bike when I was nine years old. One day, my father bought a bike and gave me a surprise. I was really happy. When I was free, I always rode my bike. I went to any place I wanted to. When I was riding fast, I felt very excited. I think I am very lucky, because my hoppy has brought me pleasure.

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  Everyone has different hobbies. Hobbies can develop your interest and make you learn new skills. I have many hobbies, such as playing basketball, playing football and riding a bike. But my favorite hobby is riding a bike.

  I began to ride a bike when I was nine years old. One day, my father bought a bike and gave me a surprise. I was really happy. When I was free, I always rode my bike. I went anywhere I wanted. When I was riding fast, I felt very excited.

  I think I am very lucky, because my hobby has brought me pleasure.

    初二:蒋婉迪