Different people have different hobbies, such as reading, painting, writing and growing vegetables. Hobbies can make you grow as a person, develop your interests and help you learn new skills.

  My hobbies are painting and reading. I think they are interesting and useful. Reading can open my eyes and painting can improve my appreciation of beauty. I always enjoy reading every day and enjoy painting twice a week.

  Everyone should try to do something new or different.

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   Different people have different hobbies, such as reading, painting, writing and growing vegetables. Hobbies can develop your interest and help you learn new skills.

  My hobbies are painting and reading. I think they are interesting and useful. Reading can open up my eyes and painting can improve my appreciation of beauty. I always enjoy reading every day and enjoy painting twice a week.

  Everyone should try to do something new or different. You may enjoy it.

    初二:蒋婉迪