Recently my classmates have talked about how to spend our fre  tome.Different students have different ideas about how to spend the free time.  Kirro is my best frend,she is a nice girl,but Interent takes up almost her free time.And sometimes she reads books as well.  My deskmate is a boy.He hardly helps hismother do husework.And watching TV takes up almost hie free time.  In my free time,I often raed books,and it takes up over half of my free time.And I always read books in the morning.Because it is good for my eyes.  Going online and watching TV are good ways to relax.But spending too much time is bad for our eyes.And I think reading books is the best way to relax and it nakes us relaxed.

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  Recently my classmates have talked about how to spend our free time. Different students have different opinions on it. 

  Kirro is my best frend, she is a nice girl, but Interent takes up almost her free time. And sometimes she reads books as well.  My deskmate is a boy. He hardly helps his mother do housework. And watching TV takes up almost his free time. 

  In my free time,I  often read books, and it takes up over half of my free time. And I always read books in the morning. Because it is good for my eyes.  Going online and watching TV are good ways to relax.But spending too much time is bad for our eyes. And I think reading books is the best way to relax.

    初二:蒋婉迪