Optimism is not only a state of mind, it is also a prerequisite for success in life.
  The pessimist says the ideal is the horizon, see if will never come to optimists say ideal is the beacon, guide us along the way; pessimists say that the setback is a stumbling block, optimists say that the setback is a stepping stone. Pessimists say that competition is a blow to the pride of the way, optimists said competition is one of the effective ways to improve their own inadequacies. Two different attitudes, different attitudes towards life. Optimism gives us strength!
   There is a fish, his name is called: dream! "A fish upstream of Bohai, through the fishermen hunting, escaped countless birds chasing. He kept swimming across the mountains, through the Shiyan, finally he swam on the plateau glacier. However, he did not have time to cheer, instantly freeze to "fish", but he still kept swimming posture. "Pessimist evaluation said: life for their dreams through hardships finally arrived, but instantly lost all meaning, this kind of behavior is stupid. Optimists say: life for their own dreams and to struggle hard, so that is full of dynamic life. Optimism gives us courage to fight.
I have read such a story, is a tree with a peach tree. The brief but profound meaning to my meditation.
   "I’m about to be abandoned by people. The bare and lonely forever is not a point value." The sad looked at his ugly body, and looked at him is the opposite of the peach tree. "See! You is so beautiful ah, you follow the footsteps of spring girl flowered together step by step, the smell of Hing, heart and spleen in the air, intoxicating, at the moment you are beautiful and elegant, and I bare. Summer you full of sweet fruit, crowd around cheering you on, even the ancients also used this lyrical poetry moving to describe you, lips a little peach Yin, Su makeup bashful partial bun bun. But I’m only bare at any time!" The cry he felt driven to distraction, this world is not fair to him. The peach only quiet smile: everything will get everything will be lost, as long as you believe.
  Soon, it was autumn gradually. Compact delicate peach skin began to split the song, peach leaf gradually deep yellow drop; jujube began to flourish his fruitful, covered with festive like covered with red lanterns, the fruits of jujube looked at the dolphin the redness, excited, with tears in her eyes. He began to believe that their God is not the outcast, he began to take root absorption of optimism in the face of life makes her more brilliant. Optimism gives us hope to believe in ourselves!
 All the suffering is in to build a better future, you have to actively face to an optimistic attitude, you will find that your world will because of your presence and shiny. Let optimism come into your mind, to create the world you want!

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  Optimism is not only a state of mind but also a prerequisite for success in life.
  The pessimists say the ideal is the horizon. Even though you can see it, you will never get there. Optimists say ideal is the beacon. It can guide us along the way. Pessimists say that the setback is a stumbling block, but optimists say that the setback is a stepping stone. Pessimists say that competition is a blow to the pride, but optimists say competition is one of the effective ways to improve their own inadequacies. It is obvious that optimism gives us strength!
   There was a fish named dream. It swam upstream from Bohai. After escaping from the hunting of fishermen and the chasing of the countless birds, He kept swimming across the mountains, through Shiyan, finally he swam to the plateau glacier. However, he did not have time to cheer, and he freezed instantly, but he still kept swimming posture. Pessimists think: After suffering from severe hardship, the fish realized its dream finally, but it lost its meaning instantly. This kind of behavior is stupid. Optimists say:In order to make the dream come true, the fish kept fighting all the way and never gave up. It’s obvious that optimism gives us courage to fight.
 All the suffering helps to build a better future, you should face it with an optimistic attitude, and you will find your world will be shiny. Let optimism come into your mind, and create the world you want!

    初二:肖磊