Hi!I’m Alice.I have a busy day.I usually get up early .In the morning,I usually get up at 5:00.Then I get 
dress,eat breakfast and brush my teeth at 5:05.Next I go to school at 5:50.Between seven o’clock and eleven o’clock,I have five classes.I eat lunch at 11:45.I don’t have much timefor lunch, so I usually eat very quickly.After that ,I have five classes ,too.So,I get home at six o’clock in the evening. I do my housework first.I never watch TV or computer games.After that, I usually brush teeth at nine o’clock in the evening.I go to bed at nine ten .This is my school day .

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  I’m Alice. I have a busy day every day.

  In the morning, I usually get up at 5:00. Then I get dressed, eat breakfast and brush my teeth at 5:05. I go to school at 5:50. From seven o’clock to eleven o’clock, I have five classes. Then, I eat lunch at 11:45. I don’t have much time for lunch, so I usually eat very quickly. After that, I have five classes, too. I get home at six o’clock. I often do my housework first. I never watch TV or play computer games. After that, I usually brush teeth at nine o’clock in the evening. I go to bed at nine ten.

  This is my school day.

    初二:孟璐瑶