The spring wind is blown green willow, the wind in the hot summer, the 

autumn wind blowing yellow rice, winter wind blowing the white earth, a wind 

blowing up my soul. 

The exam is every student work achievement exhibition, performance of 

the direct impact on students’ mood. After final exam, transcripts of home that 

day, I’m disappointed urgently, my English result is 78 points, after reading the 

report, I will not to utter a single word to lie in bed, staring at the ceiling ... ... I 

do not know how long after, the door suddenly opened, mother came in and 

sat down beside me, not looking at me, suddenly, on my mother angrily 

shouted:" you stay in bed doing? You failed the exam is you don’t work hard, 

can this strange who ... ..." Waiting for her to finish, I cried. 

Tired of crying, to dry the tears, I looked at my mother. The mother saw 

my heart calm down, she also restored the true colours, say affectionately to 

me:" the exam is important, but your subjective effort is more important, as 

long as you try your best, your life is no ’. ’" ... ..." My eyes are bright, spirit lifts, 

confidence and back to me again. Love is like the wind, take my bad mood was 

not the least trace was found. Blowing, my mind blowing a fresh.

修改后：

  Exams are often used to check students’ learning result during a period, so the scores always directly impact on students’ mood. 
  After the final exam, I felt nervous every day. When I received the final transcript, I was totally disappointed. I only got 78 points in my English test. I lay on the bed without saying a single word. I started staring at the ceiling. I did not know how long it lasted, suddenly, my mother came in and sat down beside me. She said to me angrily, "What are you doing here? Why you lie on the bed? You failed the exam because you don’t work hard... " I kept silent and waited for  her  to
finish, and then I cried.
Tired of crying, I dried the tears and looked at my mother. She saw I have calmed down, she said affectionately to me, "The exam is very important, and you must try your best to work hard. Then you can have a better future..." My eyes were turning bright and I felt confident again. I made up my mind to work harder and never give up.

修改老师：Crystal 老师 

    初一:张瑞洋