As we all know, water is very important in our daily life. We can not live without water. It is our responsibility to save water. But what should we do to save water. Here are my suggestions.

 First of all, we should form a good habit. We should turn off the tap after using it. And it is not a good idea for us to pour something dirty into the river. Second, we reuse water in our daily life. For example, we can use the water of washing vegetables to water the plants. On the other hand, as the old saying goes, many hands make light work. So we can call on more people to save water.

  All in all, the Earth is our home. So it is necessary for us to save water. Let’s try our best to save water!

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  As we all know, water is very important in our daily life. We can not live without water. It is our responsibility to save water. What should we do to save water？ Here are my suggestions.

 First of all, we should develop a good habit. We should turn off the tap after using it. And it is not a good idea for us to pour something dirty into the river. Second, we reuse water in our daily life. For example, we can use the water of washing vegetables to water the plants. On the other hand, as the old saying goes, many hands make light work. So we can call for more people to save water.

  All in all, the Earth is our home. So it is necessary for us to save water. Let’s try our best to save water!

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