Time goes like the following water. My four years time of junior high school life is coming to the end and I will be a student of the senior high school which I have been longing for many years.

    On entering my new school, I will make friends with my classmates and seize every golden chance to take part in various clubs and activities which can not only help me to improve my interpersonal skills but also release my stress. Furthermore, there is no doubt that my study task will be tougher but I will scale new heights instead of having  a little slack in the study.

    As for me, the senior high school life such as a new beginning, and I am really looking forward to it.

作者:徐颐珽

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   Time goes like the following water. My four-year time of junior high school life is coming to the end and I will be a student of the senior high school which I have been longing for many years.

   On entering my new school, I will make friends with my classmates and seize every golden chance to take part in various clubs and activities which can not only help me to improve my interpersonal skills but also release my stress. Furthermore, there is no doubt that my study task will be tougher but I will scale new heights instead of slacking off in the study.

    As for me, the senior high school life is a new beginning, and I am really looking forward to it.

    初一:徐颐珽